Doesn't sit so well for some reason...
This is weird. Like for instance the guy is left heartbroken after the girl left him. There should be some level of resentment that he wasn't enough for her in some ways. She leaves him for another, which readily appears to be much more awesome than the male character. This would leave the male broken in a lot of ways if they really cared for the other person.
I guess there's some understanding for the fact that if the girl was female, she hasn't really experienced too many things. And again I'm assuming this is a young relationship. When she doesn't really have a real scale to place good and bad on. But still, there's something unnerving with the male accepting her back into his life. There's gotta be a giant shot to his well being understanding that this would happen. And its one of those things that's almost impossible to heal unless he did the same to her at some point and came to the same reasoning.
I'll say decent job with the animation. Like it, music went well with it. Story and concept though, I pity the male character very much.
Too perfect looking
9/10 for now because you made me ponder what the rest of the series is about. i want to see it now. Please don't abandon it!
You know... I don't get it...
I will admit that after watching the other episodes that this one isnt as high grade as the later episodes, but I think you shouldnt necessarily remove it from newgrounds. I felt that this one was still pretty high grade for what we've seen come from you.
Keep this one still on here, i don't see any reason why you should remove it from newgrounds. Even if you did remake it. Other flash artist keep their original works up and its always nice to check back and forth to see the grounds crossed overtime.
Yeah, bets on it being blammed to but you did good for what you gave. Very unique looking style for what you have there. Now pump out something full and complete. I'll give you a 2 for protection. Good luck on something larger and better.
Um... I think its broken
It didn't go any further beyond me pressing the play button. Unless there was supposed to be 45 seconds of nothing...
Hey man all I have to say is that was actually somewhat good from what I saw. I realize that the previous person may of complained a bit about it... But I still thought it was good. If you're coming out with another episode I have a few reccomendations...
1.)One would be to have slightly better animation for the walking and the talking, like said before.
2.)Another would be that it would be in your best interests to maybe include a skip button on the intro.
Otherwise I thought that your immediate movement with the characters looked good and the fighting stance, though sketchy, was good in a fsu sort of way. Look forward to more.
Hey dude, nice job and all. You seem to have very nice drawings and such but you should probably work on the tweening a bit. Also you should try to throw in sounds. But overall found it quite good and hope for you to come out with something else in the future.
Nice Job man
Hey nice flash man. Though I'm not a fan for stick figure-like things, I felt that animation was pretty smooth and the sounds went well. The only thing i would complain about if anything would be how short it was but nice job otherwise. I'm looking forward to something else sometime soon.
I don't care if its too late for Valentines. All your works are great. I like your style. For some reason they bring a smile to my day. Not saying I'm sad or anything, its just that its somewhat hard to find something that's showing off how twisted younglings could be...
...Would you mind if I put a shrine up in your honor? You know nothing too extravagant, just maybe a water fountain with some type of lil demonic being being controlled by a child or something with xmas lights that blink often...
Dude it was done ok. The only thing i wish to inform you of is that the story button doesnt seem to be working. Other than that is that thing a hamster?
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